Nitro Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 (edited) So, I was listening to a freestyle over the "New York [expletive]" beat by Busta Rhymes about 2 hours ago, and I got the idea to write something similar, but devoted to NJ. Below is the instrumental, and what I have written so far (it flows near perfectly to the beat when I spit it). It isn't done, and what I need from you guys is ideas for various lines...i.e certain references or whatever. If I get it to be around 2min (it's about 80-90 seconds long right now), I'll record it and put it on youtube. I think if I get my voice right and put enough emotion into it, it could actually catch on and get a lot of views. Anyway... Instrumental We’ll stick you for your cream, dump you in that NJ pitLike the Devils at the Pru, I’m on that NJ [expletive]Evaporate your flow with my NJ spitThen catch an STD, pounding that NJ clitMan, every 15 miles there’s an urban hoodHustlaz on the corner screamin “ son wuz good”In da Garden State, dead president’s the only raceBut if you front or disgrace these dude’s slice ya faceGot mad love for New York, yet they always dissingSo we go to Coney Island, grab our dicks, start pissingPeace to Redman, and all my dude’s who rep the BricksAnd those freaks that get down like all you Rutger’s chicksThrow your lighter’s up, Pump It Up like Joe BuddenImma attack you other states like a air missile scud andTake you down and drown you in the Jersey shoreLike my girl Lauryn Hill, it’s time to settle The ScoreI spit that sulfuric [expletive], homegrown in the swampsWhere the Jets and Giants ball, let ya systems bumpDownload this joint, formatted in MP3Then rip the T.P puffin THCMy thoughts bounce like basketballs in the heart of CamdenAsIll gets respect from those who can hardly stand himOn the mic I’m like the shadow of a rappin phantomTake the letters in my name and proceed to chant ‘emA is for Asbury Park on the Atlanic OceanS is for Sinatra and the Soprano fast approachinI is for Irvington and those living ill as [expletive]L is for the ladies lying ready to suckThe last L is saved, burned after this songPeace to the 973, [expletive]’s blacked out, and I’m gone Edited October 25, 2010 by Nitro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish7718 Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 Got mad love for New York, yet they always dissingSo we go to Coney Island, grab our dicks, start pissingJERSEY SUCKS :angry: :angry: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 JERSEY SUCKS :angry: :angry: Yes, I know you guys feel that way, which is why you created Snookie in a labrotory in Albany and released her on our beaches...[expletive]s. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish7718 Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 Yes, I know you guys feel that way, which is why you created Snookie in a labrotory in Albany and released her on our beaches...[expletive]s.[expletive], you saw through our evil plan...we didn't think you guys were smart enough to realize...seems we under estimated you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 [expletive], you saw through our evil plan...we didn't think you guys were smart enough to realize...seems we under estimated you Haha, figured you would underestimate our IQ, seeing as how you guys are statistically dumber than NJ. We also are home to both "New York" football teams, have had the most successful NHL team in the tri-state area the last decade, and also by far the most successful NBA team. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish7718 Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 Haha, figured you would underestimate our IQ, seeing as how you guys are statistically dumber than NJ. We also are home to both "New York" football teams, have had the most successful NHL team in the tri-state area the last decade, and also by far the most successful NBA team......Yankees [expletive] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugoRocketsFan Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 http://c2.api.ning.com/files/S2QjNaKW8sOx-LctqTucYXcIP*AWI604j6rhoA-WazHKqkT0l05UwueSrIikglg0LGaOCRf02XEIxMfgJr7l4QXjIKxiy4pl/wigger.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NomarFachix Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 Talk about how at least we aren't smelly Euros Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 .....Yankees [expletive] Hey, as I said, I love NY, but it's dumbasses like you who hate on NJ who can eat a dick...and you're already on that so I don't need to go any further. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugoRocketsFan Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 Talk about how at least we aren't smelly Euros Rather be smelly than whats in the post above you. lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NomarFachix Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 The Bulls stuff leads me to believe he's from Chicago... Never seen something like him before. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 So...Reason, any idea that I can add to what I already wrote? Any references to certain places, people from NJ, etc..? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish7718 Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 Hey, as I said, I love NY, but it's dumbasses like you who hate on NJ who can eat a dick...and you're already on that so I don't need to go any further.woah woah woah, I thought we were just joking around here, calm down there buddy. I don't have a problem with people from Jersey it's just fun to make fun of you guys. At least your not European though... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NomarFachix Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 Yeah dude gimme until Tuesday at some point (I'm hella [expletive]ing busy until then)... I'll try and think of some Jersey culture to toss in Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 woah woah woah, I thought we were just joking around here, calm down there buddy. I don't have a problem with people from Jersey it's just fun to make fun of you guys. At least your not European though... Haha yeah my bad if I went over the top, and thank GOD we ain't European. Drive-by insults FTL.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JYD Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 Jersey goes hard son Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xx. Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 is this real life? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 So, I edited my post with a rought first draft of the song, completed (although I will happily take any suggestions). I might have to make some of the lines shorter as I don't have great lung capacity and some of those lines need great lung capacity to be spit perfectly to the beat. But, I like it so far, after some minor tweaks I think it'll be ready. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guru Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 ...that wasDOPE haha, can't wait until you record it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 ...that wasDOPE haha, can't wait until you record it Haha thanks dude. Anything you'd like to see added to it, like references to certain places or people? I was thinking of giving a shotout to all the counties, probably not in the actual verse but like after it with the beat still in the background. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guru Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 Haha thanks dude. Anything you'd like to see added to it, like references to certain places or people? I was thinking of giving a shotout to all the counties, probably not in the actual verse but like after it with the beat still in the background.Zip codes would work better imo, we have some weird [expletive] county names lolz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 Zip codes would work better imo, we have some weird [expletive] county names lolz Yeah good point I assume you mean area codes, though, not zip codes? Zip codes would be a much bigger pain than just saying each county's name. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guru Posted October 26, 2010 Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 Yeah good point I assume you mean area codes, though, not zip codes? Zip codes would be a much bigger pain than just saying each county's name.lmao, yeah my bad i meant area codes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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