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RD1: Riot vs. iBoldin


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Rules:

 

1) 16 lines max.

2) At least two of those lines must be about your opponent's favorite sports team (basketball, football, etc).

3) Cussing will be censored if you decide to use it. Don't bypass the censor with asterisks or other symbols.

4) If you say Dick Vitale's first name, please censor it yourself by typing [expletive]. In the manner it would be used in this contest, it should be filtered out.

 

NOBODY ELSE POST IN THIS TOPIC UNTIL THE SECOND RAP IS ADDED.

 

After both competitors are finished, members can place their vote. Votes are only valid with an explanation containing three or more sentences, no exceptions.

 

The lower seeds (in terms of position) go first. Based on this match-up, iBoldin will be asked to post his, followed by Riot. You have two days to post.

 

Good luck, fellas. Run yo mouth! ;)

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I'm ready to rebut something. iBoldin, not so bold are you, yes indeed I went there, I'm calling you out dear boy. Let's do this.

 

I swear I never saw this till yesterday, I just never had the time to make up a verse or whatever they call it. I'll have mine in tomorrow afternoon.

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iBoldin - fresh to the game, a real unsung Drake,

Riot - throwin' the first punch, a pivotal mistake/

 

New to the experience, circa the Tampa Devil Rays,

Try to throw that perfect pitch and I'll be on it like Willie Mays/

 

I find the perfect beat, the perfect rhyme at the perfect time,

You spittin' a lamestrumental, an imperfect preformance at the most inopportune of times/

 

Not sayin' I'm a Nas, not sayin' I'm a bug,

But like that gun barrel, I'm as hot as that .44 slug/

 

A pedestrian performance is all I need,

I could do this when I'm sleepin', how about you pass me that bag o' weed?/

 

The max was 16, I'll go two lines less,

That's all iBoldin needs to leave ya in a bloody mess/

 

I'm the Kobe to your Barnes, the Gasol to your Dwight,

Speedin' off to the second round, Your outta my rear view sights/

 

Wow, that's brutal. Hopefully it's enough though. Get yours in, Riot!

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Gave you 6 days and that’s the best you could do?

Like your New Orleans Hornets, you goin nowhere, you’re screwed,

 

And what happened man? You used to be a Raptors fan,

Tried to ride the bandwagon but you got your mom’s minivan,

 

Your verse is just straight up embarrassing iBoldin,

Like a piece of tin foil, while my rhymes are golden,

 

A “bag o’ weed”? Really? What the hell are you smokin?

B**** I wouldn’t share with you even if I was holdin,

 

Rippin you apart, dissecting you like this was science class,

My words mix like chemicals, killin you with poisonous gas,

 

Matter fact, play that back, instant rewind your a**,

So you can feel the pain again, now you’re a thought of the past,

 

You had your chance and you blew it, admit it son, you’re done,

I’m off to round 2, one step closer to being crowned number one.

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I like how Riot addressed his lyrics specifically to iBoldin's rhymes... something I didn't see in the last RYM.

 

iBoldin's lyrics felt forced, like he was placing words in certain spots just to make them rhyme properly, while Riot's felt more natural as a whole.

 

So yea, my vote goes to Riot. IMO, his was better, plain and simple.

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Totally disagree, Boldin's actually involved a bit more skill. His lyrics were real and I can feel that. Riot got a chance to play off of Boldin because Boldin went second so you can't really give Riot the advantage for doing that. When I first read the both I thought they were both pretty good. When I went back as a critic Boldin's was iight but Riot's was kinda whack.

 

Riot - 5

iBoldin - 2

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Riot - 7

 

iBoldin - 3

 

His flow was good and he had some nice dissed in there. I loved the fact that he pointed out that it took Boldin 6 days to come up with a rap and called it weak.

 

Yeah but on the other hand, it also took him six days to do so as well, and went after me. Not that I care really, just thought I'd point it out.

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Yeah but on the other hand, it also took him six days to do so as well, and went after me. Not that I care really, just thought I'd point it out.

He has to go after you it's in the rules ;).

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Riot - 8

 

iBoldin - 3

 

Both were good but I think Riot's rhymes were better. I actually liked Riot's last two lines a lot, and that may have been the factor that changed my choice.

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